Jon1
02-26-2005, 11:42 AM
Hey everyone, im doing a creative writing course in grade 12 and an assignment we have to do is write a poem that could be on anything. I was just wondering what you all think of it. And if i should maybe add something or take off something, please tell me. Thanks. This is going to be pretty easy for all of you to get, since this is a fire site!!!!
It illuminates an orange glow,
And an aura of red.
It can be as hot as the sun,
And can go on and on.
It can crumble down homes,
And rumble through dry forests.
It can endure a long, hard fight,
And it may be everlasting.
When seen, people frown,
And water tones it down.
It can turn the bright morning sky dark with haze,
And turn the night sky into day.
It can take peoples lives,
And oxygen it thrives.
What is it?
It illuminates an orange glow,
And an aura of red.
It can be as hot as the sun,
And can go on and on.
It can crumble down homes,
And rumble through dry forests.
It can endure a long, hard fight,
And it may be everlasting.
When seen, people frown,
And water tones it down.
It can turn the bright morning sky dark with haze,
And turn the night sky into day.
It can take peoples lives,
And oxygen it thrives.
What is it?